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Warm Glow

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Probably can't even tell its supposed to be the northern lights ;o; but the sky looked empty with out em q-q oh well I tried. and sorry for not posting any thing for weeks ;o; I was having problems with my drawing program. I was about to post something a loong time ago but the next day it said the file could not be found, I couldn't even open it ;o; so all those days of hard work was gone .-. buut any ways I'm back! c:  :icongreenheartplz:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

i stumbled across this in my messages so i decided, why not give a critique and help someone out? ^^

first of all, this is really nice! i love the entire "feeling" of the picture. the colors are nicely chosen and the lighting and effects are very nice.

the first issue, though, is the anatomy of the character. the head is slightly too big and the ears need to be a bit shorter and wider. also, the curve in the upper arm shouldn't be too defined, try putting a bit more fur around it and making the lines a bit thinner as you go up next time. ^^

onto the face. i know you're probably going for a bit of a more cartoonish/anime-ish style, but the eye is far too big. the muzzle looks nice, but the nose is a bit too big as well.

some other small issues i've noticed is the hair; the ear seems to be awkwardly placed on top of the hair, when the hair should instead be going around the ear, covering it a bit. also you should define the strands of hair a bit more, and instead of freely drawing the strands, start from a point in the middle of the head and choose a "part" for the hair to divide and flow from (if that makes any sense.)

otherwise, i really love this. you have a lot of potential! i hope none of this has offended you, i just want to help<3 and if you ever want another critique let me know!!